DESCRIPTION OF DIAGRAMS WITH COMPLEX RELATIONSHIPS

The diagram shows the process in which a tourist resort can develop. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Version 1

Summary

The diagram illustrates the links/ stages/ tourist attraction goes through/ development.

As is clearly shown, new hotels constructed –> hospitality jobs.

Another aftermath of hotel establishment –> the demand for local suppliers which + the coming of hotels –> other businesses to constellate in the neighbourhood.

Supliers –> support hotel construction

The expenses of workers (where?)  –> increase tax which + businesses –>  indirectly more jobs.

Noticeably, this addition of jobs and the increase in local income from tax and living expenses have a reciprocal relationship.

The more people pay tax, the more money  –> enhancing infrastructure and tourism which in turn makes the area –> more popular as a tourist hot spot. This –> more profit for reinvestment in new hotels with support from local supply businesses. However, in this construction, some money is lost through leakages.

Overall, different factors in the development of a tourist resort have mutual relationships that favour the growth of the industry, the supporting services and the local area as a whole.

 The essay

The diagram illustrates the links among stages a tourist attraction goes through in its development.

As is clearly shown, after new hotels are constructed, their operations directly generate hospitality jobs. (việc làm trong ngành du lịch) Another aftermath (hệ quả) of hotel establishment is the demand for local suppliers which, together with the coming of hotels, attracts other businesses to constellate in the neighbourhood. The services of local suppliers then give a push to the momentum (đà, trớn) of hotel construction. Besides, the expenses of workers in hotels and other companies in the area contribute to increase tax collection which together with businesses in the area indirectly creates more jobs. Noticeably, this addition of jobs and the increase in local income from tax and living expenses have a reciprocal relationship. (quan hệ tương hỗ)

The more people spend and pay tax, the more money is poured into enhancing infrastructure and tourism which in turn makes the area become more popular as a tourist hot spot. This yields (đem lại) even more profit for reinvestment to build up new hotels with support from local supply businesses. However, in this construction, some money may be lost through leakages.

Overall, different factors in the development of a tourist resort have mutual relationships that favour the growth of the industry, the supporting services and the local area as a whole.

(212 words)

 

Version 2

The diagram illustrates different stages of the development of a tourist resort.

At first, new hotels are constructed and employ staff for their operations. Also, they create demand for local businesses and suppliers which in turn support the construction of new hotels. The growth in such businesses and the advent of (sự đến) new hotels then attract other companies to move into the area. Workers from these newly arriving companies and new hotels, with their expense in the local area, increase the area’s tax and revenue which then help expand the job market. The same effect is created when local services and new business comers indirectly generate more jobs for the resort. The financial gain is subsequently (sau đó) used to develop infrastructure, and quality of tourism services as well as advertise for the images of this hospitality industry. When the area becomes well-known, more profits and revenue is expected for reinvesting into building up new hotels. However, in reinvestment into expansion plans, some money is lost through leakages.

In general, the development of a tourist resort follows a complicated process in which components have close and even two-way relationships to improve the area in various aspects. (193w)

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