Giải đề IELTS ngày 29/11/2019 – Computer test

Giải đề IELTS ngày 29/11/2019 – Computer test

Task 1:

A bar chart about the possession of technological devices by British people of 4 age groups in 2009

Task 2:

Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others believe that there are other factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Happiness, for some people, is attributed to one’s success in economic achievements but is an aggregate (tổng hợp) of many other factors for others. This essay will look into these two viewpoints to explore different components of happiness.

The material abundance is obviously what can bring people happiness. The amount of wealth is usually parallel with the level of needs that can be satisfied in people’s lives, and this correlation is the engine behind (là động lực đằng sau) people’s hard work. For poor people, having a car or a house can make them blissful, (hạnh phúc) likewise for affluent or famous people, possessing their own planes or cars of limited editions can bring them satisfaction. Therefore, regardless of people’s social statuses, (bất kể địa vị xã hội) people all happily enjoy their material possessions at different levels. Also, people often mention happiness when they have successful business. In contrast, hardships like family breakages, termination of romantic relationships, or even depression are closely associated with failure at work.

However, success is not solely dependent on financial achievements, but it is also derived from (phái sinh từ) other factors. Indeed, the feeling of inner peace (sự bình an trong tâm hồn) people have when they make useful contributions to their communities is a crucial part that makes them feel life is rewarding. (cuộc sống có ý nghĩa) That is why Bill Gate, the billionaire, donates nearly all of his fortune to charity projects for curing AIDS, eradicating polios, or developing free electronic library for the world. Also, sincere and high quality relationships can be invaluable support for people to move forward without any fear because they know that come what may, (dù bất kì điều gì xảy ra) they are not abandoned. That feeling of security (cảm giác an toàn) is surely a catalyst (chất xúc tác) to promote people’s everyday hope and confidence in a better tomorrow. However, the most important component of all that forms the core (cốt lõi) of happiness should be love. Without it, happiness can hardly exist or is only like a glass half empty. (cảm giác nửa vời, lưng chừng)

In conclusion, wealth plays an important part in leading a happy life for many; however, in my opinion, to fully form happiness other aspects like the inner peace, valuable relationships, and love are also very essential. (around 350 words)

Viết một bình luận

Facebook
YouTube
YouTube